"Yuzurunakatta Tenshi (Surrendered Angels)" An erotic story by Laurel and K-kitty Tio is owned by K-kitty; his portion of the story was written by her, and Rain is owned by Laurel; her part of the story was written by her. It was originally done in role-play style and has been converted into story style for easier reading (for once ~_^). This story contains graphic sexual situations. Please do not read if you are not of legal adult age. Just to clarify, Rain is half human and half Neptunian alien, which will explain some things you'll encounter reading the story. * * = emphasis ** ** = thinking ...it had been so long and so lonely. Maybe she'd even invite him to go... further. She couldn't help it. Rain leaned up and kissed Tio on the mouth, a gentle, innocent, but hungry kiss. WHAM! Tio felt the feathery touch of her lips and his still-not- really-stable hormones kicked in big time. He was so hard so fast, it hurt. "Nnnngh.." He let out a very soft moan. Then he leaned down and answered her kiss, but held back on the major moves. She wasn't acting like she knew the score... he wasn't used to that.. and didn't want to push his luck. Tio crawled onto the bed with her, but on the outside of the covers, lying beside her... dropping a few more kisses on her mouth. Such strong urges rising up in her! Rain tried to suppress them for the most part, feeling slightly afraid. But she so wanted him to cuddle her... maybe even pet a little. "Would you come under the covers with me? I get so lonely... cuddle me." Her soft nightgown whispered against the covers as she moved them as much as she could, trying to make room for him in the small bed. "Um... cuddle? Uh....." He groaned again, she didn't have even the vaguest clue... either that or she was just plain old cruel. But he *knew* she wasn't that... "Uh. Is that a ...um.... *good* idea? You're really very pretty and all... an' I'm only a normal guy... I might..... it might get really kinda... over-heated?" Tio was fighting down the throbbing in his jeans. Damn he was really starting to want her real bad. But he moved closer to her none the less, he couldn't help it. Rain giggled, blushing in the dark. "That's okay, if things get... overheated. I like you Tio. Um... I'd like to cuddle with you. I want you to touch me. Things get so lonely for me... please kiss me." She ran a trembling hand over his arm. Feeling giddy at the sound of her voice, he settled in beside her. "Oh, I like you too, you're beautiful... I'd *love* to touch you." He ran boths hands with gentle fingertips down her face as he began to kiss her very slowly. He kissed her mouth, then gently caught her upper then lower lip with his lips, giving them both their own kiss. OHHHHH how this sent shocks of heat through Rain's body. So gentle, so slow... she closed her eyes and accepted the wonderful kisses, feeling his hair moving against her face. How she wanted him to caress her all over... to quiet the fire growing inside her. Then he stroked her hair. **Ah, silken heaven.** Just like he'd dreamed of doing before. Tio wrapped his arms around her, drawing her as close as he could, breathing in her scent.... so heady he was already drunk with it. Ohhhsogood...so good to be held. Rain loved the feeling of Tio's warmth against her. She stroked at his back, put her hands in his hair. She couldn't help but press her breasts against him, her excited nipples needing to rub human skin through her silky nightgown. Oooooh that felt nice... Rain let out a tiny moan. His cock was urging him to move against her, but he stopped that... it might frighten her. "Will you..... will you touch me, too, Rain?" Tio asked in a soft voice. She nodded against his face. "Yes." Rain whispered, "I want to touch you all over." As she moaned, he shivered. Oh, wow.. this was intense... Tio slid one hand down over her throat and daringly cupped her breast. The hard nipple brushed against his fingers, and he smiled into a long deep kiss, as his thumb brushed back and forth slowly over the excited nipple. He shuddered then.... anticipation making him even harder than he'd been, the beating of his heart pounded need into his veins, the old worn out jeans were suddenly way too tight. Tio moved his hand to the other breast... wishing she were naked... Rain couldn't help herself; it felt so *good.* She cried out, "AhhhhHHH!" at the touch of his hand, and leaned into the kiss as he teased her nipple. Gods she was so wet, so aroused now. How far could she let this go? Rain had no idea, but just wanted him to keep touching her like that. "Mmmmm Tio." Fire coursed all through her body. His fingers whispered over the surface of the nightgown. "Ohhhhhhh..." She squirmed. Rain ran her hands over his chest, just wanting to feel the closeness of his skin. He was so *warm.* Her tail, still hidden under the nightgown, moved back and forth along the backs of her thighs. It was so soft. Everything was arousing her now. She squirmed, grinding her legs together, and moaned again. "Oh, angel..... mmmm... you're so..." The *need* was growing stronger, he felt the zipper biting into his cock and the slight pain turned him on more.... he had to touch her flesh... He took one hand, while kissing down her neck and back up to her ear, and slipped it into her nightgown at the neckline. Tio reached her breast and caressed it then cupped it. Rain let out another soft moan, pressing her hard nipples against his hand as it moved over her naked breasts. Ohhhh she was so hot, so aroused, so wet... her body heaved and rubbed against his. He moved back to her lips, unable to get enough of the sweet taste of her, and kissed hard, teasing her lips apart with his tongue. All this while he was brushing each finger and thumb over her erect nipple. Rain accepted his tongue in her mouth, the arousal growing in her so quickly it scared her. So warm against her... so hot between her legs... She moaned into his mouth. He shuddered and held on to her, continuing his kiss. Tio didn't need to hear her moan to know Rain was hot... and so was he. He moved himself close and ground his hips against hers... mimicking the act... primitive need taking over him. Rain gasped. He was so hard against her panties! She could feel it even through his jeans. Did she do that? Either way, it felt good, so she rubbed against him. This made the fire worse. Rain could take no more. Carefully she grasped one of Tio's hands and moved it down toward her panties, spreading her legs apart. "Touch me please, Tio," she begged breathlessly. He moaned in return and shuddered, his body beginning to move all over, caressing her with his whole self. He was so hot, so ready... he'd never wanted to have it like this.... the need was so good... so painful... another groan escaped him. "Unnnnngggghhh............ oh, Rain..." Tio took a liberty he wasn't certain she'd granted and slid his hand *inside* the silky underwear, through the soft, silky hair to the very heat of her. She was so wet already... her clit was hard... "Ohhhhh!" Rain spasmed at the touch of his hand. **So good, so good!** He arched his back, and pulled away from the kiss as sweet tremors began in his body.... oh, he could cum thinking about that sweet, warm, wet place.... He pulled himself back from the edge and lowered himself to her again. While his fingers gently rubbed over the passageway into her, the heel of his hand rubbed her clit. Trembling still, he kissed her. "Oh... Rain... you're so..... you get me so high..." "Ooh..." Rain arched her hips against his hand. She began rocking her hips around, creating more friction, working herself into what she didn't even understand was an orgasm. How she wanted his fingers inside her... she pressed against him harder, hoping he would know and she wouldn't have to ask. "Mmmmmmuhhhh... oh Tio... ohTio!" "Uhhhnnnggg," he groaned. How he wanted to be inside her... but it was too late now... she was rocking so fast... he knew she was working up to it..... moaning again, he slid one finger up into her carefully... and found a slight resistance there. Oh, man... NO... not a virgin... ohboy... but his one finger could go inside without rupturing her... so that's what he did. His long middle finger slid into her deeper and deeper, stretching so that his thumb could still rub her clit. "Oh..... Rain... baby... it's allright... let it go, baby.... let me see you..." Rubbing harder... matching up her movements... One of her rocking hips was brushing against his hard crotch as she moved. "Unnnnnggghhhh.... oh, angel... yer gonna make me... uhhhhh... like that..." Tio didn't want to cum like this... he wanted her to... if he came he wanted to be in her. Tio shifted just a little so that she didn't have that contact there. When Tio's finger slid up inside, Rain thought, "Ohhhhhhh YES," this is just what she wanted. Her hips rocked harder, more and more insistent. Rain didn't even realize what she was doing. But it felt so good. His finger inside her, she was so tight, her muscles grasped greedily at the new visitor as it slid in and out. Heat and fire and waves of good GOOD pleasurable feelings washed all over Rain as she came closer and closer to the first orgasm of her life. "Uhhhhh... ahhhh... Ti... o... yes..." *Pantpantpant...* "...yeeeeah... uh... uh... yeahbaby right there right thAHHHHHH!" Something *exploded* between her legs. Was this an *orgasm*? Ohhhhh so good, felt so good... such a huge release! It was like a firecracker wizzing through the air, and WHAM! It blew up. Rain closed her eyes and rode the waves of pleasure, her entire body shaking and her breath fast. Tio watched, himself drenched in sweat just from their combined heat. When she came he nearly followed. When she hit cooldown, he pulled her close, pulling his finger out slowly... aw, man he wanted that so bad... and smoothed her clothes down around her... With one last kiss, he hugged her and whispered soft things. "Oh, Rain.. you're so beautiful... gods... so beautiful..." Tio was so hard and throbbing.. it *hurt* so bad ... he *needed her*... he kissed her again, and held on. Not knowing what to do... Rain made a tiny sound of pleasure when Tio took his finger out. She was already too flushed to blush at his lavish compliments. "Tio... did you... um... I want it to be good for you... but... I'm a virgin. I'm not sure I'm ready to go all the way yet. I want to take care of you though. Can I touch you? Or... maybe we could shower... together? I could... please you orally... let me make it good for you. Please tell me what I can do..." Rain was feeling braver and all warm inside. "No.... NO..." Tio pulled himself away. "Nuhhh... unhuh.. T-that's okay... I'll take a cold shower or something..." He felt embarrassed and humiliated.. he wasn't going to sink so low as to make a *virgin* whack him off... He backed off the bed away from her, shame coloring his perceptions and his blood pounding in his ears. He didn't comprehend the gentleness of her suggestion, or the honest beauty... just that he'd been pawing all over a *good* girl.... and he was a *bad* boy. He jumped up and made a dash for the bathroom. Rain looked after him, feeling hurt. Tears threatened in her eyes. Did he think she wasn't pretty now? Had her behavior, of asking him to stroke her until she came, she *came,* make him think badly of her? Oh he must think she was a whore! Rain desperately wanted to shower with him, to wash off these guilty feelings, so they could both feel good before they fell asleep. She got up and walked to the bathroom door, talking to him through it. "Tio? Um..." A tiny sob escaped her. "Can I shower with you? Please." Rain let out a choked wail. "Do you still think I'm a pretty angel?" She finally broke down crying, very quietly. The door opened almost immediately, and Tio reached out and hugged her fiercely. Rain threw her arms around his neck and cried into the crook of it. "You're an angel, Rain... please don't cry..." He held her and petted her hair. "I didn't mean... to hurt you... I... He gulped against tears he didn't want to shed, then in a small voice continued, "I'm ..... bad... I..... shouldn't touch good girls like you..." Tio set her aside just a little. "You're a very beautiful angel, you're good..." Shaking his head, he proclaimed, "I'm bad... dirty... I wanted to ..... wanted to *do it* with you... right then.... I still do... so bad it *hurts*... but I don't *want* you doing... touching... bringing me off .... like that... it's *nasty*... and you're a *good* girl..." "You're not bad. I wanted you to touch me." Rain dropped a kiss on his neck. "You're not bad and dirty, Tio. I think you're beautiful. Whoever told you that is wrong. You can't help what's happened to you, where you live. You're a sweet, nice boy. Many boys would have raped me. But you wanted me to feel pleasure. Good boys do those things. When two people who care about each other give each other pleasure, it's always a beautiful thing. There's nothing nasty about it." She was gripped by a braveness she didn't know she had, born out of such deep caring for this nice, sweet boy. "Come here... come here Tio." Tio did just that... he seemed dazed, almost... and didn't seem to have comprehended anything she told him. Rain guided him by the arms back to the bed, and started kissing him. "You couldn't be a bad boy and take such good care of me. Kiss me." Holding his jaw, she gave Tio several deep, sensual kisses. He did as he was asked, and seconds later it was if a layer of ice melted away from him, and he was truly kissing her... as though he'd never stopped. Rain felt sexual stirrings in her crotch again. She squirmed down on it, so good... felt so good! Everything felt so right, so perfect. It was time. Carefully she layed down on the bed, pulling him down on top of her, and rubbed his back, planting little kisses on his neck. Rain whispered in his ear, her voice laden with arousal. "Make love to me. Take my virginity. I want you to have it, Tio. Please. No one has ever been this good to me. You're so sweet... kind... please..." Fear melted back to the burning in his groin. Something inside him, that had nothing to do with feeding the growing need inside him, lit up... he felt like he'd just been touched by something holy.... He looked down at her for a few seconds, then nodded very slowly. Tio reached down and plucked at her gown. "You *are* an angel, Rain... straight from heaven... um... do you want to take off your gown?" His hands went to his jeans; he *had* to get them off, they were hurting. Rain watched him strip, hunger for his body against her growing. Tio pulled the jeans and the well-worn underwear off, his hard cock sprung out, red and hot... "You strip me, baby." She rubbed at his chest as he loomed over her. "I want to be naked against you..." Rain purred. "Um..." His hands slid up under the hem of her gown and began to raise it upwards, kissing her knees and thighs as he went. Rain's eyes rolled up in her head in reaction to how good this felt, then she closed them. It was so good, so right. She whispered, "Oh Tio... hon..." When Tio reached the waistband of her panties, he stopped to pull them down and away... then pulled the gown up and over her head. Rain was still wet, and with this renewed attention, she was heating up again. When the panties came off, she made a soft erotic sound. Her gown slipped off and she was naked. She wasn't embarassed, not at all. She wanted him to see her. Something soft wagged back and forth slowly across the sheets, near Rain's waist. It was too dark to see it. Her body was so beautiful it stunned him. He wanted to touch it all over... and without another sound, proceeded to to do just that... Tio ran his fingertips up her legs, around her hips and over her tummy... Then he carressed her breasts, and finally able to do so... he suckled at each one. He was completely lost in a frenzy of learning and touching and exploring... the hard driving need was fighting within him for the knowing of this beauty. "Mmmmm... ohhhh honey... that feels so nice..." Her nipples responding to Tio's attention, she closed her eyes again. **Ooooooh so good...** "Oh baby..." Rain was beginning to pant. "You're so good... that feels soooo good..." Any fear she felt about this act before totally melted away. Tio answered her moans. Oh, gods... the heat in his cock was spreading fast.. faster than before, to his whole body... too many more sounds like that coming from his sexy angel and he was going to cum all over himself.. just listening to her. "Oh, god Rain..." His hands explored her all over, one finally traveling down between her legs where he'd been before. She was still wet... He petted her, stroked her clit and slid his finger in ... he groaned again. "Uhhhhhmmm!" Rain cried. "Yes, yes, ahhhh!" She whispered frantically, "Feels so *good*!" Rain's cries and whispers where just sending him. "Oh, no, baby... *you're* so good... unnnngggghhh..." He raised up and kissed her on her mouth, as he slid himself into a position between her legs.... he didn't even realize his knee had worked it's way between to give him the room. Tio removed his finger, and put his cock's head up near her clit... rubbing it there, and looking down into her eyes. "Mmmm... Tio! So nice. Oh baby!" Rain moaned, licking her lips. She had begun to tremble again, and instinctively spread her legs further apart. "Uhhhh... uhhhh..." she mewled at every stroke. "Are you ready? It's gonna hurt... I'll try to make it not bad... but..... Rain... are you sure?" "Yeah, Tio. I'm ready. This feels so right." She softly kissed him on the mouth. Rain thought she might die of the anticipation! His blood pumping so hard he could hear it in his ears, Tio still managed not to get so excited that he came when she said yes. He raised up over her.. damnit he'd never done a virgin before... he knew it hurt... but he wasn't sure how to not make it that way. Tio put two fingers at the entrance to her depths and guided the head of his cock right up to her, pressing just lightly. That felt so hot, and sort of cute at the same time. Something soft and yet hard, and warm, rubbing against her. Pressing. Rain spread her legs a little further apart, so curious to know what it felt like to have him inside her. A part of her wanted to press hard up against Tio's cock, but she figured it would be better to let him have the control at this moment. "Unngghh.. Oh.. Rainrain... you feel soooo goooood..." Drawing in a breath and pressing forward a bit more, at the first sign of resistance he slowed, bended and kissed her. The heat inside him was telling him to rush... but Tio didn't want to... he wanted to be inside her forever. "You feel good too," moaned Rain, panting. The more Tio pressed into her, the more she wanted him! Oh Gods, she could feel him opening her up! Renewed hot juices flowed from her, making her ready to receive the stiff visitor. It felt good, but unfamiliar. Nothing that large had ever been inside her before. Rain hungered to know what it would feel like to be filled up. "Hold on, baby... here we go... if it hurts, you just bite down on me...ne?" "Okay." He pressed his cock inside her not roughly, but all in one strong stroke. She was oh, so tight.. he was gonna cum.. he had to back off.. calm down... For Rain, there was one strong wave of searing pain, like something ripped inside her. Rain let out one cry, like a sob, and then she felt alright. Tio filled her up completely. That felt good. Right. She wrapped her arms around him, never wanting him to take his cock out. She could feel herself just dripping wet down there as her body began to enjoy the feeling. So tight around him. So warm. Rain could even feel the blood beating through Tio's cock, she was so tight and untested. Tio couldn't move or he'd cum... so he sat still within her. "Ohgodbaby... oh, god so good Rain... I... oh... you're so good... gonna make me cum girl... I gotta hold on... oh......" He didn't know he was babbling that over and over... but he just held her as pleasure rocked over him, and soon he'd be able to stroke her. "Oh Tio... I like it. It feels so *nice*," she breathed against his shoulder. For Rain, the word 'nice' was a huge compliment. He almost cried when she screamed.. but when she spoke he calmed back down... he wasn't hurting her that bad... maybe this was good for her afterall... Taking several deep breaths, Tio moved himself back just a bit. "Unnngggg... oh, yes... I like this too... so... good." And then he thrust in deeper again. Shuddering as he felt the pressure building up so high inside him. Another gasping breath and Tio began slowly thrusting in, and drawing back... again and again. Rain began to make small, feminine, aroused sounds. It hurt just a little, but he was going in so deep that it actually started to feel very... very good. Because she was so tight, Rain could feel the head of his cock as it slid in and out, toward and away. It was as if she could feel every throbbing vein, every wrinkle, every inch of hot skin stroking her inside. This was intense! She had never felt anything like this before. The pain was giving way to such heated, wet, delicious friction. Ohhhh he moved so good... the head of his cock massaged her most sensitive inner spots. Rain conformed to fit him, to snuggle his cock, in her tightness. "UhhhHAAAA!" She gripped his back, pushing her hips toward him. He kissed her, one hand first stroked her hair, then it dropped to her breast, caressing hungrily any flesh it could find... while the other hand worked it's way between them, where they were joined, so that with every thrust he made sure his fingers were there to caress her clit... it all felt so good... "You make me feel so good, Angel... so good...." Shuddering and throbbing within her, every touch, every scent was arousing him to the point just before orgasm... How Tio wanted to thrust hard into her... hard and deep and keep doing it 'til they both came forever. His fingers on her clit, his cock stroking and caressing her inside, the intense throbbing and quivering... "Uhhhhhaaaa TiOOO!" She was becoming lost in this intense, mind-numbing, awesome feeling. "STROKE me! Ohhhh so GOOD!" Her voice was hoarse and high-pitched. Rain's hips instinctively thrust toward him. Suddenly she realized she liked the slight pain too much. She wanted to feel that cock head thrusting in and out, caressing her sensitive spots, quicker and harder. Her hands gripped his ass and shoved him in so his hand was caught against her clit, pressing down hard. Rain cried out, "HuhAHHHH!" and arched her back. "OH GODS SLAM it to me TIO! Deeper! HAAAAARRRDer! AhhhhhAHHHH!" MORE heat! MORE friction! Tio couldn't have held on after that if he'd tried... he pulled back away from her long enough to rub her clit... then began a pounding rhythm with is his hips; his hand freed itself and he grasped her hips and pulled them both together. Faster... "Unnnggghhh!" Harder! "Uhhhhggg..." Over and over, DEEPER! OHHHH so GOOD, HURT so GOOD! Rain could not hold herself back. She cried out at every thrust loudly, her shyness a memory at this moment of succulent lust. "AHHHH! AHHH! OHHHH! TIO! HARD! ER! HHHHAAARDER! AHHHHH!" He felt it and began to snarl... then growl low at the back of his throat... he drove himself into her as hard as he could; Tio was no longer in control of his driving need.... through his snarl he cried her name. "GggrrRRrrRRaaaiinnnnnnn.... I'm.. you... gonna... aarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggghhhhrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" A little pain mixed with pleasure! Rain felt released from any inhibitions she might've had as she yeowled, "TIO FUCK me in HALF! AHHHHHHHaaaahhhh!" It was an animalistic sound. He froze above her once, swooped down on her for a lusty, deep and intense kiss, as he exploded deep within her in a final almost violent thrust. Her innermost depths awash in his seed and their lovemaking. "UhhhhhhHAAAAAAnnnnggg!" Rain came at this thrust so hard she saw stars. Her nails dug deeply into his back. Her body flushed with heat. She couldn't see, couldn't think, just feel those stars exploding all through her body. Was this sex? Why didn't people do it all the time? It was awesome! Tio kept moving afterwards, his hand returning to her clit... making sure she was going with him... He had no idea he was crying... "Ohhhh Tio..." Rain's voice became soft again. She was calming now, trying to catch her breath. "That feels so nice. Don't pull out. Stay inside me for awhile, and cuddle me. Pet meeeee..." she purred. Rain kissed tears from his face. His breath in half snuffles-half growls, he relaxed himself down on top of her, resting most of his weight on one arm, he pulled her to him with the other and stroked her hair, and down her bare side, shivering at every aftershock he or she had... since hers made her clench down on him. Tio began to rock her back and forth gently, unable to stop the tears from his eyes, but he wasn't thinking about them. "Rain..." he said in a hoarse voice, "...you're beautiful... so special..." To be continued...