The Miracles Mary Sue Litmus Test

Hey, I (Laurel) said I'd run my own characters through this test, and here are my results. A few of these characters have not been used in a fic yet; they're from fics I have yet to write. Therefore, if you see an unfamiliar title, it's an unwritten story.

Recurring Characters:

Fiona Baylock (Sebastian Keel's personal assistant) = Scored a 9.

Kate Campbell = Scored a 12. She had a lot of "Maybe" answers.

Paige Cash = Another one who scored 12. The older version of Paige (who appears in dreams) is the reason her score is that high; the older version is a bit of a bad-ass, though she won't use any of her bad-ass skills in the Miracles stories. (She's from an original series of mine.)

Edge Donata/Michalchuk = Scored a 13.

My characterization of Mr. Friendly (Kellen Murtaugh) = Scored a 6.

Indra Beadleman = Scored a 9. She's not even a MaryOoh; her sole purpose for being created was to fix Alva's back. The other stuff just sort of came out while I was writing.

My characterization of Alva Keel's father, whom I named Dr. Sebastian Keel = Scored a 12.

My characterization of Alva's mother, whom I named Vivian Keel = Scored a 9.

Holly Macher = After I made some decisions about this character's purpose in the series, I retested her and she scored an 11. She originally scored an 8.

Lassiter McNeal = Scored a 5.

Tracy McNeal = Scored a big fat ZERO! :D

Gabriella Santos = Scored a 13.

Julietta Santos = Scored a 6.

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From Where is My Tunnel of Light?:

My characterization of Mr. Friendly (Kellen Murtaugh) = Scored a 6.

My characterization of Jon Renshaw = Scored a 9. We know for sure that he had sex with a canon character... ;D

*****

From Psychomantium:

Paige Cash = Scored a 12.

Dana Canon = Scored a 4.

Holly Macher = After I made some decisions about this character's purpose in the series, I retested her and she scored an 11. She originally scored an 8.

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From We Were the Dead:

Brent = Scored a 1.

Dakota = Scored a 1.

Lindsay Nelson = Scored a 1.

Manny = Scored a 1.

Diane McNeal = Scored a 4.

Lassiter McNeal = Scored a 5.

Tracy McNeal = Scored a big fat ZERO! :D

Sam = Scored a 1.

Serena = Scored a 2.

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From The One and Only Real Thing (if I actually ever write this one):

Edge Donata/Michalchuk = Scored a 13.

Bret "F***face" Sealey = Scored a 3.

Beirget "Beer Gut" Tollop = Scored a 2.

*****

From The Circle:

Kate Campbell = Scored a 12.

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From The Gentleman Who Fell Before the Court:

Fiona Baylock (Sebastian Keel's personal assistant) = Scored a 9.

Kate Campbell = Scored a 12.

My characterization of Mr. Friendly (Kellen Murtaugh) = Scored a 6.

Ricochet = Scored a 6. Hehheh, this is my little joke, because Ricochet is Alva's childhood pet dog that I created. And he scores higher than some of my people. XD Hey, I did say I would eventually test all my original characters, didn't I?

*****

From She Just Wanted to Be Heard:

Dana Canon = Scored a 4.

Indra Beadleman = Scored a 9.

Charlotte Sawyer = Scored a 15. Not a surprise, since she's something of a bad-ass, and will have her own cross-over series. Right on the edge, phew.

*****

From The Red Line South to Dallas (if I ever actually write this one):

Kimberly McNamara = Scored a great big 1! XD

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From Family Tree:

Kate Campbell = Scored a 12.

Molly Kagan = Scored a 5.

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From The Coins Part 2: Stay With Me (not sure these characters are actually going to be used in this story at this point; the story has changed a lot in my head since its original inception):

Steven Donata = Scored a 9.

Dagger Turnadot = Scored an 11.

*****

From The Lesson:

Indra Beadleman = Scored a 9. She's not even a MaryOoh; her sole purpose for being created was to fix Alva's back. The other stuff just sort of came out while I was writing.

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From You Can't Help Who You Are:
Officer Marie McCann = Scored a 5.

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From as Yet Untitled Stories:

Jon Calaway = Scored a 4.

Liam Calaway = Scored an 11.

Morgana Calaway = Scored a 13.

Theresa Callan = Scored a 5. Yes, Paul's mother.

Truett Donata = Scored a 12.

(A MaryOoh = My term for a character created solely to have sex with a canon character. You're supposed to moan the "Ooh" part like you're having a reeeeally good time. ;D)

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